The first stage

Posted on April 15, 2022 at 4:32 am by Daniel Kelly

Jill’s right to complain about the gendered insult. I’d set up Peggy’s refusal to use no-no words, so her flipping out here should be a payoff, but it would’ve worked better if she’d just said “fuck”. Now the impact is muddled a little. Ah well, I think the general point remains.

I do like that, angry as she is, Peggy takes the time to secure Riley before arguing with the ref.