"Also you can keep the girl you're abusing I care enough to only kind of stop you"

Your mission, should you choose to accept it.

Exit Milo Erickson forever. He was very efficient with his time, though. He established some worldbuilding that has been unclear, and gave the villains a more direct motivation to go fuck with Jill. This page is mostly just some exposition, but it also helps move the plot along. A completely functional page! There’s even a nice little character thing with Milo helping himself to an appetizer on the way out.

I like this page. It’s not one of the Great Legend of the Hare pages, but it’s good at quickly and efficiently limning the plot, something I tend to be bad at. Perfectly cromulent page.

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